Hi John!
First of all, thank you very much for joining us in this course. I hope you have found tools and resources that may be useful in your day-to-day life in general, and in this case in particular, in your career as a photographer.
I really liked that you presented the project as a video on your YouTube channel. It is something that sometimes should be remembered: One of the great strengths of storytelling is its ability to adapt to any medium and format, and of course video is one of the most powerful.
The story you tell is very interesting to me. A personal story, with all the ingredients that a good narrative needs. It is also curious how in this case we have a clear antagonist ... who in a certain way becomes the trigger for change and transformation. There is no doubt that sometimes we need to know what we do not want to find the path we wanted.
As a possible point of improvement, simply comment that at some points in the video I would raise the levels of the voice a little and lower the music a little, so that all the attention is focused on what you are telling.
Good luck with your channel and with all your projects!
It has been a pleasure!!!
@gabrielgarciadeoro thank you very much for your comment, try through music also to generate feelings of happiness in the first part, then some sadness in the part of the death of the former boss, to end with a somewhat stronger band simulating anger, I want to know if I got it? a hug and greetings from Colombia
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Profesor PlusHi John!
First of all, thank you very much for joining us in this course. I hope you have found tools and resources that may be useful in your day-to-day life in general, and in this case in particular, in your career as a photographer.
I really liked that you presented the project as a video on your YouTube channel. It is something that sometimes should be remembered: One of the great strengths of storytelling is its ability to adapt to any medium and format, and of course video is one of the most powerful.
The story you tell is very interesting to me. A personal story, with all the ingredients that a good narrative needs. It is also curious how in this case we have a clear antagonist ... who in a certain way becomes the trigger for change and transformation. There is no doubt that sometimes we need to know what we do not want to find the path we wanted.
As a possible point of improvement, simply comment that at some points in the video I would raise the levels of the voice a little and lower the music a little, so that all the attention is focused on what you are telling.
Good luck with your channel and with all your projects!
It has been a pleasure!!!
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@gabrielgarciadeoro thank you very much for your comment, try through music also to generate feelings of happiness in the first part, then some sadness in the part of the death of the former boss, to end with a somewhat stronger band simulating anger, I want to know if I got it? a hug and greetings from Colombia
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